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PostSubject: Ranpu (Light)   Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:19 pm

Zanpakuto Name: Ranpu (Light)

Spirit: A royal purple haired woman with shining golden eyes.

Awakening Call: Shine, Ranpu.

Sealed state: An average katana.

Shikai Appearance: The blade disappears as with Rangikou's Zan and it can create large flashes of light that will momentarily stun the enemy.

Shikai abilities: The light from before can also be solidified to work like Kage Ryuu's old form (a lot of tendrils that can be used as whips)

Bankai Appearance: The sword will merge with Drake's body and form a golden suit of armor. I can't find any pictures and really can't explain how it looks...

Bankai Abilities: When they merge, the sword turns into a giant broadsword twice the size of Drake, who carries it with ease, and his powers grow exponentially. He can control the light which radiates off of him and use it as a weapon, or can dim any lights he sees to the point of darkness (Not including the sun). He can also brighten lights up to a blinding point. All light can be used as a weapon.

Stats:

Strength: 21

Endurance: 21

Agility: 20

Spirit power: 22

Spirit control: 18

Magic: 18

Inner Hollow: Kage Ryuu (Shadow Dragon) A raven haired man who enjoys solitude and darkness. Acts somewhat like you would expect of an inner hollow, hungry for blood and destruction, pretty standard.

Mask Description: It looks like the face of a dragon and will give him one extra ability. He can control fire, but it is very limited.

Mask Powers: Weak Fire Control, Cero, Sonido

Okay, I rushed it, so how is it?


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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Sun Apr 03, 2011 8:50 pm

again stats are too high, limit of 120.

Also it seemes fine, though you are misjudging your charge times. A battle goes by very fast, and everal attacks could have landed in that 10 seconds of charge time(for one of your "average charges").

Otherwise it is good.

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PostSubject: Eh...   Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:25 pm

What would be good charge times? Cause, I'm not sure about it... Thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:34 pm

try halfing the charge times, and starting at 0 for a weak attack. A good trip is to imagine yourself fighting, and count out the seconds(one Mississippi, two Mississippi) as your character would have done.

And thank you for changing the stats, approved. At 3-a

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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Fri May 13, 2011 6:55 pm

I have a question. Is it possible to change into a Vaizard when already a Shinigami? And would it increase your power ranking?
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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Fri May 13, 2011 6:57 pm

yes, it says so in the rules/guide as long as you make a good convincing post i believe
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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Fri May 13, 2011 7:16 pm

Awesome, thanks man!
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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Fri May 13, 2011 7:19 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Fri May 27, 2011 7:45 pm

Okay, he's a Vaizard and I will have to get re-approval as a lot changed.


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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Fri May 27, 2011 8:04 pm

looks fine approved again

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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Mon May 30, 2011 6:38 pm

Okay, so as he's become a Vaizard now, does he go up a rank from 3-A to something else? Just wondering as he's much stronger now...
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PostSubject: Re: Ranpu (Light)   Tue May 31, 2011 4:27 pm

You can go up a rank. you are now 3-S yay! I don't really want to get people into the tier 4 just yet. Maybe soon though. Just keep working at it.

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