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lilligant

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PostSubject: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptyFri Mar 18, 2011 12:15 am

Power level 2
Strength: 37
Endurance: 42
Agility: 32
Spirit Power: 42
Spirit Control: 42
Magic: 57
Sword Name: Leila(Beauty of The Night)
Sword Spirit: Leila Hana(Beauty of The Night Flower) which is a female wolf with black and pink cherry blossom patterns all along her fur. Her eyes are a bright red and when in a human form she has dark black short hair and is wearing a long midnight colored kimono with red cherry blossoms covering the bottom. She is a devious and michievious sword spirit who loves to pick on her wielder, Lilligant, and loves playing tricks.
Sealed Sword: http://www.renaissance-outfits.com/images/sk565pk.jpg
Shikai Appearance: http://fullspectrumpraise.com/Merchandise/Jewelry/SWRD-PK-S.JPG
Shikai Abilities: In shikai Leila is a smaller jeweled pink katana where it is then able to use some of it's real powers. In shikai Leila can send cherry blossoms in a sworm at it's enimies but it isn't very strong and also it can charge a pink light at enimies.
Bankai Appearance: http://images.clipartof.com/small/97798-Royalty-Free-RF-Clipart-Illustration-Of-A-Silver-And-Pink-Sword-With-A-Matching-Shield.jpg
Bankai Abilities: Leila Hana in bankai is able to create large blasts of pink and black energy and can shoot it at people. Also Leila can make large cherry blossom sworms that are larger and more effective in this form as an attack.


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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptyFri Mar 18, 2011 10:03 am

looks good but two things.

You didn't follow the app you can cut a part of your history for the description of how you got your powers. and the description, and abilities shouldn't be to hard to do.

Also your stats don't add up to 60 you still have 10 points to spread out. I know you may be weaker than other characters but that will be handled with the point adjustment from your power level.
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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptyFri Mar 18, 2011 8:11 pm

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptySat Mar 19, 2011 1:05 pm

Approved. though now you have 10 points to many lol Very Happy but anyways once you fix that your approved at a 2s (2nd tier, rank strong, and you gain an additional 12 points to EVERY stat.[meaning don't choose where they go])
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lilligant

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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptySat Mar 19, 2011 6:04 pm

Fixed and minused 10 points from agility since I had 10 to many. Then I added 12 to all of them.
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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptyMon Aug 22, 2011 8:49 pm

I would like to point out to you Lilligant, that having Bankai and Shikai so soon after the event is kind of... Well, impossible. You should point out you don't have it, as Bankai usually takes thousands of years, or something like that. Also, you should rename the topic from 'Lilligant's Bracelet', But that's just me being nitpicky.

And Lucon, she changed into a Shinigami via the Event that we have been doing, which was monitored by Roy/Lulu. She will need reapproval.
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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptyMon Aug 22, 2011 8:57 pm

Unless Lucon has anything wrong with this

I'm going to say that her being turned into a shinigami is okay with me as since she is a new shinigami she has to get past the obstacles of quick steps, and the basics of kido. Which can be taught to her through Coren/drake/ranpu/kage ryuu >_> other than that i see no real problem

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PostSubject: Re: Lilligant's Sword   Lilligant's Sword EmptyTue Aug 23, 2011 7:22 pm

Yay! And yeah she doesn't have her bankai yet... Going to be a LONG time until then.
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