Brandon Maboroshi Admin
Posts : 74 Join date : 2010-12-19 Age : 33 Location : The clammpet still. im keeping this oen becuase that is not a bad place to be
| Subject: Brandon Maboroshi Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:07 am | |
| Name: Brandon Maboroshi Age:560 (looks 19-22) Gender: male Occupation: Soul Reaper (half hollow) with complete dominance over his hollow Description: Thin, semi-muscular, combination of gohan's hair(DBZ season 4) and dark's bangs (DNangel) black, Black skin tight jumpsuit with a backwards B with the virtical side bumpy, he has mood wings relaxed;white mad;grey enraged or using evil power;black, if needed feathers can be used as weapons but use is limited to half limits of hollowfication. he has a 1.5m. monkeys tail black, the suit has fingerless gauntlets with my symbol on the forearm, 5'8" with no shoes on, suit also has a belt with a pouch on the right hip, carries sword in front of pouch, wears blue teardrop earings in each ear, Has mood eyes happy;green normal;hazel mad;brown enraged;black. also tends to wear denim pants and button up shirts in his body. Hollowfication full: dragonic shape,hole in chestcenter,black scars cover body, 8ft sepentine tail mask is crimson on top black on bottom separated by jagged white line Hollow powers: speach less zanpakatou use, normal cero, normal balla, (rainbow similar to a prism he uses his reiatsu to focusamplify and divide the spectrum of the cero increasing the power by seven fold. note cero can only achieve twice a day Balla can achive 20 times a day Maximum any more will result in a loss of reiatsu use for 5 years.) rainbow cero, rainbow balla, instant healing (limited to bone tendon cartilage artieries lungs liver kidnys and spinal cord only) Sword element: spectrums of Light, Dark, and Light and dark Hybrid Sword power: see zanpokatou registration History: having never died his body never degraded and he uses it as his gigai. after outfitting his soul with a mettalic skeleton for training purposes he did the same to his body and trains it along with his spiritual powers. his beginning as a soul reaper began when a hollow cast him out of his body and he enter the state of conciousness that allows you to enter the world of the zanpokuto. similar to ichigo his inner world was being devoured by the hollow that attacked him and he obtained his soulreaper powers at the moment he became a hollow. he joined the gotei 13 and rose in the ranks to eventually join the infamous Zero squad. he retired and has been travelling between dimentions to gain knowledge and power to share with the bureu of research and development for future inplimentaion. hasa returned to fight hollows and hep who ever he choses.
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Lucon1 Admin
Posts : 306 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 29 Location : Tulsa OK
| Subject: Re: Brandon Maboroshi Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:43 am | |
| Welcome Brandon. The app looks good, but some stuff is missing/doesn't need to be there.
need gender. even though it is implied you are male, the application has it.
zanpakuto powers, and stuff go with your abilities app. Other than this, it looks great, odd sounding though lol. | |
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Brandon Maboroshi Admin
Posts : 74 Join date : 2010-12-19 Age : 33 Location : The clammpet still. im keeping this oen becuase that is not a bad place to be
| Subject: Re: Brandon Maboroshi Fri Dec 24, 2010 2:11 am | |
| how is it odd and can anyone draw my character by using his description my hands cant do writing or drawing well. in fact the only thing theyre good at is video games and martial arts. | |
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Lucon1 Admin
Posts : 306 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 29 Location : Tulsa OK
| Subject: Re: Brandon Maboroshi Fri Dec 24, 2010 12:16 pm | |
| I was saying odd, because of the whole, rainbow, and light/dark stuff. and the whole over the top anime look(monkeys tail, skin tight jumpsuit, and wild hair)
But again you need to move the hollow powers over to your abilities app. | |
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Lucon1 Admin
Posts : 306 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 29 Location : Tulsa OK
| Subject: Re: Brandon Maboroshi Sun Dec 26, 2010 6:41 pm | |
| ehh whatever. you're approved. | |
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Brandon Maboroshi Admin
Posts : 74 Join date : 2010-12-19 Age : 33 Location : The clammpet still. im keeping this oen becuase that is not a bad place to be
| Subject: Re: Brandon Maboroshi Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:39 am | |
| oh well the tail and wings are genetic traits and the hair is when he doesnt hold back when he does its a short spikey look. | |
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