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PostSubject: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir   Thu Dec 09, 2010 10:02 pm

Name: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir

Age: 132

Gender: Male

Race: Shinigami/Half-Hollow

Appearance: Lucon is small by shinigami standards, standing at 5'5" and weighing only 117. He often gets picked on for his small stature, but turns back on the person with a witty comment. He appears to be about 23 by human standards. He has messy blue/gray hair and light brown eyes. His attire consists of the normal black kimono, hakama, and white Obi. He usually has his top more open, revealing the white under-cloth which has his sword on top which would normally be concealed by the black cloth. He is always concerned with his appearance, and doesn't like to look to casual. However one thing he wears that is odd is a pair of pink socks at the request of Alseid.

Personality: Lucon is a very calm, laid back, and carefree person. He is often found dozing of somewhere, however, not from his laid back demeanor. He is a work-aholic, and stays late at the lab many nights. He does not like to leave a job unfinished, and takes great pride in his accomplishments. He is very curious, and when he sees something new or interesting he will immediately start exploring it, and trying to find out as much as possible about that object.

He has a strong sense of justice, and believes that Soul Society is not handled the way it should be. Though he believes this he follows all the laws, and commands of his superiors. Lately though things have been changing. He has a hollow spirit inside him, and that threatens to separate him from Soul Society, and His work. He tries to keep it a secret but finds it harder each day to do that.

History: Lucon was one of the lucky spirits. He was born into District 5 of East Rukongai. He had a great life, and his parents owned a repair shop, where he developed his knack for technology. With it being so close to Seretei there was very little trouble, and he had nothing to worry about.

When he was 15 there was a fire at his parents workshop. Lucon had run inside to find his parents dead on the floor. Soon a shinigami came by to respond to the accident, and found that it was arson. Lucon followed the shinigami to the roof, where a dark figure awaited. the shinigami called it a hollow, and rushed forward to strike it down, but was killed instead, saying that it's name was Samuel. Lucon grabbed the fallen sword and held it out. The hollow tried to lunge, and Lucon held the sword out hoping the creature would impale itself. He tried to put all his willpower into it. It worked and unknowingly he used his reiatsu to augment the attack, causing it to strike true. The hollow was defeated, but not gone. Lucon does not remember the name of the hollow, and had lost memory of the battle.

Later shinigami came to investigate the missing member, and found Lucon on the roof passed out from the strain. They were surprised to find him alive. He had great spirit power, and so they took him to seretei for healing. When he came to, he was told what had happened, and if he wanted to join the shinigami academy. Lucon was excited. He admired the shinigami, and had nothing left in rukongai. He joined the academy a week later, and graduated several years later.
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PostSubject: Re: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir   Fri Dec 24, 2010 5:10 pm

DENIED THIS APP SUCkS...lol jk man Lucon nice app even though I am not an admin I will post.
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PostSubject: Re: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir   Fri Dec 24, 2010 7:48 pm

Come on man, I know you can do a tad bit better on the personality and appearance. Here's a tip: When doing your personality, get like two or three main personalities and expand. As for appearance, just a bit more effort into it. No offense, it doesn't suck, believe me, my first App sucked so hard it was like "WOW".
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PostSubject: Re: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir   Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:39 pm

I think its good. my personality is two paragraphs, and has "three main points" if you will. (laid back, workaholic, curious, strong sense of justice.) And I think I aptly show his appearance. Though I didn't really define his facial features, you could draw him pretty well, if you were good enough.

I do admit though, that I wish I could be better, but I'm not a professional author who can spend five paragraphs describing one item.

Your fine Kuroda. Comment on people's apps, and help them out. It would be a big help, to me, the other mods, and even the other members of the forum.
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PostSubject: Re: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir   Fri Dec 24, 2010 11:00 pm

In that case I will gladly do it.
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PostSubject: Re: Aryaca, (Lucon), Tyeir   Fri Dec 24, 2010 11:28 pm

Well since you put it that way... DENIED! Naw jk Approved.
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