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PostSubject: Drake Kratos   Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:38 am

Name: Drake Kratos 

Age: 236, but Look to be 18

Gender: Male

Race: Vizard 

Appearance: • HUMAN
• First Vizard Form   When Drake uses his mask he slides his hand over his face and the mask appears. When he is done he just rips off the mask and tosses it and the mask turns to ashes before it hits the ground.

Personality: Normally quite, but can talk sometimes, doesn't like to show a lot of his emotions so he stays mainly calm, and keeps a strait face. Drake doesn't like to be toyed with and when he does he is very quick to take the person out. Stubborn, short-tempered, strong-willed and impulsive, he attempts to maintain a detached and "cool" image, despite claiming not to care about what other people think about him, His outspoken, hot-headed demeanor is a trait Drake himself acknowledged, and that if somebody picks a fight with him, he cannot help fighting back.

Background: Drake was raised in the feudal area of Japan, things were very different in that time, Drake could always see things that others couldn't see, he could see the spirits that walked around, but sadly he could see the hollow that try to eat humans and the sprites. As he grow older he became stronger and skilled in the ways of the sword. After a few years when he reached to be about 13 Drake made his first kill of a hollow. The hollow was weak but it still put up a fight when Drake fought it. When Drake killed his first hollow he made a oath to himself that any hollows that where in is village, or any spirits that need help fining to way out of earth he would be there to kill the holllow, or help the lost soul. Years and years has pasted and Drake killed many hollows that were in his village and he saved souls that were last. Until one day his life was cut short, drake was fighting a hollow that can clones itself. Drake could do all that he could he put up a fight that lasted for 1 hour, Drake would kill one clone and the hollow would make more in it's place, no matter how hard drake could try he couldn't seem to find to real hollow, after time has passed from when the fight started there were so many hollows that Drake lost count of how many where attacking him. Soon Drake was over powered by all the hollows that they killed him at the age of 18. When Drake woke up he find himself looking over his lifeless body, that was almost impassable to identify back in that time. After a while a girl wearing a black kimono walked towards him "Thank you for doing what you did in the village, but now you can go to a place where you will no longer need to fight hollows anymore" the soul reaper passed on Drake. When Drake went to the Soul Society he notice that he was still different from the rest of the souls, he found out that he could become a soul reaper like the girl who passed him on. After graduation from the Academy Drake was a full soul reaper now, but there was still one thing that he didnt know the he could do...

Demo: foot steeps running on hard wood floors, the sound of heavy breathing, "Damn it, I'm ganna be late for the graduation." Drake said as he was running through the Academy. Drake over slept that day and today was the day he would graduate from the Academy and join with the soul reapers in the 13 court guard squad. As Drake was running though the hallways passing all the students that haven't graduated yet almost running into them, but he would flash step so he wouldn't run into them. But his flash step wouldn't take him that far. "Man they are going to started without me and ill have to wait to join, i really cant be late" drake said, just then drake stopped by a window and looked outside "AHHHH!!! THEY ARE STARTING WITHOUT ME" Drake said as he yelled. drake flash stepped outside to the court yard. He could see all the Captains from the 13 court guard squad there. Drake Ran the flashed step to get closer and closer to the graduation. When he finally reached the end of the group, he found his empty chair on where he was support to sit. Drake flashed step to his chair and sat down. Drake took a deep breath and thought o himself "made it before i got called" "Drake Krotes!" said the person that was going to be giving him the award of joining the 13 court guard squad, "madeit just in time" Drake said to himself


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PostSubject: Re: Drake Kratos   Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:58 pm

as of yet no second vizard forms. otherwise approved. If you want a better rating at the end, you may want to improve your app, as of right now, it is lacking.

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PostSubject: Re: Drake Kratos   Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:08 pm

What is it lacking?
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PostSubject: Re: Drake Kratos   Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:03 am

You have pictures which is good, but that's still no supplement for written words. You're personality is only 2 sentences, not much detail there. Just give it more body, add a short history, etc.

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PostSubject: Re: Drake Kratos   Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:08 am

ok i added more stuff
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PostSubject: Re: Drake Kratos   Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:23 pm

looks good. thanks for adding the extra stuff.

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