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PostSubject: Sanjuro, Vice Captain of Squad 9 (vizard in seceret)   Sat May 21, 2011 3:49 pm

Name: Evergreen Sanjuro (Sam)

Division: Current Vice Captain of Squad 9

Age: 1024 actual; visual 29

Height: 7 Feet

Race: Shinigami (vizard in secret)

Appearance: Sanjuro could be attractive, with his full mouth and 7-feet of well-toned muscle, if his expression didn't look permanently annoyed. His hair is a deep mahogany and stands up in all directions like a spiky halo, framing pronounced features set in a proportioned face. His eyebrows are straight and serious, his nose prominent and narrow. His green eyes are hard, solidified by years of exposure to the bitter side of life. His body tells the same story; numerous close shaves with hollows and the like have left scars in gashes across his back and torso. His ominous look is intensified by the tribal tattoos painting his arms with intricate patterns and shapes.
Sanjuro wears a sleeveless black shinigami uniform and a sleeveless captains jacket over it with white sandals and black socks.

Gender:Male

Personality: Sanjuro wears a hard outer mask, put in place after years of reclusiveness and lack of social interaction while he was alive. However, he has a soft core that turns fiery in battle. He avoids social interaction unless it is a necessity, and people generally perceive him as strange and intimidating, possibly dangerous - someone you should not cross, and they don't.
Sanjuro is incredibly intelligent - intuitive and incisive. He has the ability to think on his feet and make split-second decisions on which he can act immediately. He spends most of his free time in the library, reading and re-reading the thick leather-bound books that line its many shelves. When he's not paging through old books, he spends hours training with his zanpakuto on scolding roofs under the blazing sun.

Specialties abilities: Sanjuro’s uniqueness comes with his eyes. Due to the animal nature of his zanpakuto his eyes are keener than usual granting perfect vision in both eyes . He also has a photographic memory something that aids him a lot when having to remember the names of new recruits. He was also born with no clear dominate side allowing him to use both side of his body equally.

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Sample RP:( Would be for when he became captain)
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PostSubject: Re: Sanjuro, Vice Captain of Squad 9 (vizard in seceret)   Sat May 21, 2011 7:31 pm

Character looks good. However you cannot start as Captain. You may gain that later, but you cannot start straight that way.

Also you are missing your "race" It is implied you are shinigami, but you are still required to have that in your application.

Ambidexterity and photographic memory is fine, but you cannot have innate eye effects. I don't see a problem with those abilities, but you would need those to come from either your sword, or special items (Lucon[my squad 12 character]would be happy to make you some special contact lenses)

but otherwise this is okay, fix those things and I will approve this.

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PostSubject: Re: Sanjuro, Vice Captain of Squad 9 (vizard in seceret)   Sun May 22, 2011 7:01 am

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he is a vizard but doens't use the power yet and nobody knows of it. Once I have written the section on him gaining dominance over it then he will use it but until then he won't.
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PostSubject: Re: Sanjuro, Vice Captain of Squad 9 (vizard in seceret)   Wed May 25, 2011 2:51 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Sanjuro, Vice Captain of Squad 9 (vizard in seceret)   Wed May 25, 2011 4:31 pm

sorry was away.

when I meant you can't start as captain, I meant you can't have a rank posted on your application, but I will approve it anyway. Register on the gotei 13 page and I'l get you a spot.

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