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PostSubject: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 9:02 am

Sword Name: Ultimaica

Sword Spirit: A female human, innocent and sweeet, rivaling Dimitrius's personality.

Sealed Sword: Katana, 4'6

Shikai Appearance: Shi's Clothing doesn't change, but his sword replicates itself and both hover around him.

Shikai Abilities:First off, he can control the swords with out touching them, similar to senbon sakura, but he can move each independently.

Bankai Appearance:


Bankai Abilities: He can spawn up to 10 swords at his will and use them independently, the more swords the quicker his energy dissipates 3-lasting 8 posts 4-7 5-6 6-5 7-4 8-3 9-2 10-1
The longer the swords are you the easier the swords break. The swords move at 20 mph and move allong side him when he shunpos, and have a range of 15 feet

Inner Hollow: Kaosu

Mask Description:

Mask Powers: Cero, Pesquia

Strength: 20
Endurence: 10
Agility: 25
Spirit Power: 30
Spirit Control:15
Magic: 20



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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 4:29 pm

Okay, I know I'm not a mod, but don't you think that 50 independent swords is a little much? How could you block that? It just seems a little overpowered. Also, I don't think you can get Hierro from your mask, as Hierro is skin. But, as I don't really know much about that, it's up to the mods to approve you. Pretty nice otherwise though, so nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 4:45 pm

Well i know 50 is alot, but its mostly for making a sheild, to block attacks so anything over 5 it op
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 5:22 pm

As in you use 5 to attack? Or to block? Also, wouldn't blocking with around 45 swords be redundant? You would only need one... Or six in extreme cases... <.<
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 5:26 pm

i mean in total 5 swords is op, but id use more to block more often than attack. Since this character enjoys fighting his arrogance is his weakness along with the more swords he makes the shorter the duration of the bankai.
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 5:38 pm

Oh, okay. That makes sense. Thanks for explaining. Though I didn't know that your Bankai had a time limit... You should probably point that out in the actual app.
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 5:40 pm

Its not a time limit more of energy consumption before he cannot bear to do a single more think to fight, how jsut before one passes out they go into their unreleased state.
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 5:56 pm

Oh. So it just drains you the more you use it? Makes sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 5:58 pm

So in the way i put it, 50 swords = one use, one attack, last resort.
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 8:04 pm

1.List the time span of your bankai
2. Can the swords be destroyed? If so then how
3.50 swords? How fast do they move? i need like mph or something
4. Hierro is natural to hollows so you dont have a hierro, unless Lucon says otherwise

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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 8:11 pm

I'll cut the swords down to 10 for obvious op reasons, The swords can be destroyed as i get weaker the swords will break easier. Duration goes from 3 - up to 8 posts
4 - up to 7
5 - up to 6
6 - up to 5
7- up to 4
8- up to 3
9- up to 2
10 - one post
They move 10 mph
and a range of 15 feet
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 8:19 pm

Just saying... The speed of the swords can be faster than 10mph.. I can run faster than 10mph...

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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 8:32 pm

Okay So does 20 mph sound good?
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 9:11 pm

Yea thats perfect

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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 9:14 pm

Anything else that needs to be adjusted?
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 10:02 pm

No just tell me when you edit the post

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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Fri May 13, 2011 10:24 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Dimitrius's Zanpaktou/ Inner Hollow   Sat May 14, 2011 10:29 am

Approved at 3-w

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